Nicholas A. Vandermolen
Creative writing
12/13/04
Portfolio Critique
After looking over my plethora of great and mind expanding pieces of art I have decided that I have done an excellent job.
I reread over all my poems and was enthralled as well as floored when I read my poems. I discovered there double meaning, and there intricate meaning. I have seen there hidden messages and subliminal speak. I see its dark context and its loving syntax. I fully understand their meaning. They must be form God.
For the portfolio I only changed a minor typo in “Seeing the Farce.” I decided that they are good in there current state. As was aforementioned, they are sound.
The Story, 17th Century Anarchism, once again is pure literary genius from the heart and mind of no one lesser then Nicholas A. Vandermolen. I decided that this story is phase one of a multi-phased approach on the current geo-political and economic power wielders of the literary underworld that was started by R.L Stein and will end with ME. This story is future, this story is hardened steel. Mechanized.
I gave the story out to a number of my people; they read through it and pointed out many corrections. I fixed many. There are most likely at least a couple left. Contextual errors elude me often. During Christmas break I will collaborate with the renowned Jake Brege and discuss the stories ups and down. It will soon refined by fire. It will be hardened to the core.
As for this class:
I think I did awesome. I produced funny, entertaining, and creative works on a consistent basis. I followed through with all the work. I read most of the stories and all the poems. I participated in class and prodded Kevin to order pizza in class. I feel I did well, if not better. I think I deserve a good grade. I think the 20 page story that only had to be 8 speaks for it self. I go above and beyond. I go far. I go for it. I get it.
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